Sunday, December 20, 2009

PHIRR SE....

( before you read - it's a poem written by me.. its the first time i have attempted a poem. this poem "PHIRR SE" is about the moment when fate brings you face to face with your troubled past after a long gap of time (say 10- 20 years) . it can be anything.. like lovers separated, friends who submitted themselves to their ego and broke the beautiful relationship and all such situations ... I dedicate this post to my idol- one n only GULZAR SAAB)

Na jaane kyun ye silsila shuru hua phirr se,
kyun wo chehra roobaroo aaya phirr se...

waqt ka pahiya bohot tez ghumne laga hi tha..
ke aaj achanak is lamhe par aakar tham gaya phirr se...

socha tha ro ro kar ye aankhen sukh gayin hongi..
magar aankhon me nami laut aayi phirr se...

nafrat ki jin zanjeeron se bandh liya tha apni chahat ko,
ek jhatke me wo saari zanjeeren pighel gayi phirr se...

jin aankhon ke toofaani sagar se dil ki kashti ko kheench nikala tha kabhi...
unhin aankhon me is dil ne gota mara phirr se ...

wo zehreeele khwaab jinhe kismat ke takiye ke neeche daba diya tha kabhi ...
unhin khwabon ne nainon ko dasa phirr se...

mujhe toh laga tha kismat apne saare chal chal chuki hai,
magar kismat ne fenka apna shaatir paintra phirr se..

na jaane kyun ye silsila shuru hua phirr se,
kyun wo chehra roobaroo aaya phir se ....

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by prashant

Gratitude !!!!!!

Hi frns!! While I’am writing this post I am on cloud 9. 9 followeres in less than 9 months of its launch ! now I don’t know whether it can be called a good growth of my blog or not … but I am delighted.

This time round once again I don’t have a specific topic to write on. I’m writing this post to extend my heartfelt gratitude to some special people … so here I go !!-

Big big big thankyou to all the readers of my blog. It is because of you that my blog has achieved whatever little success it got. There are a few people whom I’d like to thank specially.. let’s start with mmm…mmm….. ok vishakha. She was the first person who started following the blog without me asking her to do that. This showed her genuine interest in my blog. Besides she gave a flattering comment – "I am ur big fan from now".It felt nice.. sorry I think I should remove the garb of modesty- it was a fantastic feeling!!! The second person on my list would be mmm ….mm … ok I’m going to name 4 people together, sumit , harshita, neha(meshram) , saket. All of them said that they were deeply touched by the story and even cried while reading it This kind of response to on amateur writer like me means a lot! Thankyou buddies I hope I can deliver credibly in the times to come and not let you down. Shriti didi your comments are always very encouraging. Thanks!. Thankyou anubroto and kapil for your comments. Also my special thanx to my dear bua anita atta(a telugu word for bua) ,because of whom i can proudly say that i have got international readers of my blog( hehehe) !!!!! Now its time to thank the girl who gave the 1st unknown hit to this blog- vanshri. I didn’t know her earlier. I never told her about my blog, neither did I send her the link but she not only visited the blog but also started following it! Later she sent me a friend request on orkut and I came to know that she’s a friend of neha and saket and from them she heard about the blog. It felt great to know that my blog has started getting word of mouth publicity. A few of my friends read the blog and scrapped me their feedback. Tanpreet said –“ hey acha hai …………par story ki ending achi nai lagi”, that’s the beuty of having a friend like tanpreet, she speaks her heart and is bluntly honest. Always be like this dear, you rock!. Smriti said-“ very nice blog yar… mind blowing”. Thanks for your mind blowing feedback. Neha(katiyar) said-‘ha yar i checkd ur site..very interstng.......try some topcs...i wll sugest sum 2...serusly gr8 going’. Thanx dear .. n I’m waiting for ur suggestions….!! More recently I got my second unknown hit.. a blogger named ‘vijay’ who’s got a very entertaining blog of his own visited the blog and liked it.. yippeee!!!! The best moment for the writer is to see that someone is appreciating your work not just in front of you but also to other people and telling them that it’s a must read ! I got to experience this moment thanx to my dear friend- Neetu . When someone asked her how my blog was she got very excited and made the sign of beautiful with her fingers(luckily I could sneak that moment). WOW .. yipeeee ! believe me that moment gave me sooooo muucchh joy that even topping in 12 board exams cant give ! thanx Neetu !

Lastly I would like to thank my parents for always supporting me and believing in me. Without you all this wouldn’t have been possible. I would like to use this post as a platform to extend my hertleft thanks all the people and places I’ve come across in my life. All my blogs are the reflection of my enriching experiences in life.

Thank you!!!

Cheers !!

prashant


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